Elise



I was meant to be named Elise
but my aunt stole that name away from
my mother—from me

I never felt like an Elise anyways,
but even so I’ve always felt a strange ownership
of the name and when the girl named Elise sat
in the back of my painting class, I felt a kind of
kinship to her, perhaps in name or what might
have been in name.

About this poem

This poem was based on a true story. I was supposed to be named Elise and I shared a paint class with a girl with the same name. Naturally I had to write a poem out of it.

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Written on 2020

Submitted by lifeasalyric on November 06, 2022

Modified on April 14, 2023

21 sec read
2

Quick analysis:

Scheme XXX XXXXXX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 337
Words 71
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 3, 6

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