It's the day when I born



I do remember that day
when I met u                             
there was a lightning thunders                         
All the night gone silent.                             
I was bored and I kicked u                  
Then u cried louder                                             
I don't know what happened
all went around me like a 3d sound                                           
the sun raised   ,there was a bright colours infront of me when I came out ;                                               
I haven't seen this before
it is colours of rainbow            
you had taken me to your hand
but, I  still watching at the rainbow ,
then drop of tear of yours fallen on my cheek
I do remember it is the eight colour of rainbow  

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Experiencing the day when a baby coming out of mother womb

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Written on December 07, 2021

Submitted by suryanalamati99 on September 11, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDBEFGHIJKJLJ
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 746
Words 111
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15

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