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And, I'm breaking

Prabin Panta 2004 (Lamjung)

Heart is beating
Mouth is shouting
Eyes are crying
Ears are listening
And,
I'm breaking

World is faking
Sun is setting
Light is fading
And,
Darkness is rising

Hope is vanishing
Life is ruining
Voices are disappearing
And,
People are dying

Devils are rising
Gods are falling
Thoughts are corrupting
And,
Distance is increasing

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Written on October 06, 2022

Submitted by Atley0 on October 06, 2022

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Scheme aaaaBa aaaBa aaaBa aaaBa
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 340
Words 72
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 5, 5, 5
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