Moonshine Music



The bassline of your speaker reverbs my mind
To think addictively of you. I can attach sounds,
Rounds of affection to show your smile,
Exposing the real me, posing as your lover,

Spinning out, waiting for you to pull me in,
Enter your room on a regular vibe,
Sunshine down, moonlight up, lights on,
Clear to see those hazel, especial eyes,

Repeating your music, to me, poison.
A liquor that cracks me yet leads me back
To your walls. Normal scenarios give me the most joy,
Like my strange addiction(s). You appreciate me.

We’re out more in the moonshine,
Where your music rings my ears constantly,
A ringing that makes me weak and I giggle,
I guess you’re funny. Not as funny as me.

Music comes in as a medicine,
As a glue locking lovers in place,
In one bubble we danced till the moonshine collapsed,
To the sunrise we slept, to the last you’ll be kept.

About this poem

This poem was first published on the 27th September 2022 as a romantic account to a new lover. It includes the various stages and implications a night time setting had on the romance as well as the use of music as a stimulant for more sensual activity.

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Submitted by willrenshawbusiness on September 29, 2022

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Scheme XXXX XXXX AXXB XBXB AXXX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 866
Words 178
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

William Renshaw

William Renshaw born on the 25th May 2004 is a British poet coming from Newport, Wales. He is an honours student at the University of Bolton studying BA English. Growing up in a family of retail labourers and engineers, He hasn't particularly made a stand in the professional world of poetry until now working toward publishing his first 2 collections, 'Thoughts Expand' and 'The Theory of Love.' Living in the Greater Manchester area and also residing in Blackpool from 8 to 18, he has grapsed a rich culture for the North West of England. His poetry work usually features an abundance of mellow topics including death, suicide and a pessimistic decline of the modern world. More recently, William has began writing romantic poems for his lover and ones that any person can involve themselves within. We know he got a fair amount of inspiration for his poems from his A level Sixth Form tutors Natalie Collister and Rebecca Bain. He also received a fair amount of inspiration and guidance from his late Great Grandmother, Evelyn Haslam who passed away in 2018. Eldest son of Alexandra Renshaw (1983-pre) and Lee Renshaw (1978-pre). He has 1 brother, Thomas Renshaw (2006-pre) and a sister, Victoria Renshaw (2012-pre). more…

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