I surrender

Julie Carranza 1086 (Los Angeles)



Touch me lightly
Kiss me tender
Bite my neck, I surrender
Caress my body and pull my hair
I got goosebumps everywhere

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Written on January 01, 2000

Submitted by Juliecarr04 on September 17, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 118
Words 23
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5

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