Stream's eyes



This streams eye been jaded
Made callous and soon be faded
Of which I knew by the books in your faces that your ex gone.
I can read through your literary retina White lies and alibis
But you don't need to pretend as Sadducees

Your swimmers took from you a break
If you're still standing I can filled up the space
Let the bygones be part,
and yesteryears troubles you felt away in dart

Else I should know where I could stand
Amidst your heart or your sour gland
Just wanted you to let go and give me your chance
Promised to treat you as prizes
I will pay some new sacrifices
And I will likely be on your time pictures
A lovely suitors.

About this poem

Worried worn and Jaded eyes of a girl that was broken. A new lover was asking to play a role of amendment to her heart if she give a trying second chance.

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Written on September 07, 2022

Submitted by LiteralErudite on September 08, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAXBB XXCC DDXXXEE
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 636
Words 128
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 7

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