Like rain, i feel for you
Veedika Sisoddiya 2007 (New delhi)
Looking out the window we see,
Yellow clods covering sun beneath.
Plesent wind blowing you off,
Peacock dancing and start'ta show off
Suddenly you might feel tiny crystals on face,
Then you realise rain falling with pace.
Trees literally dancing you see,
Children the guffawing all over the street,
But Charlie Chaplin would be out to weep.
Have you ever wondered how could people hate the rain?
When the ocean came all the way to give you tiny kisses when you are in pain.
isn't it unfair?when the people down here become happy, when the precious sky up there Cries with its soft and Misty Eyes.
Finally the sky out all his pain,
The overflowing of water goes all in vein.
Gradually the rain slowing down you see,
but clouds still thundering, still hiding sun beneath.
As soon as the rain stops,
birds chirp and insects come out.
Leaving the flora green and healthy,
Enabling their offsprings to be wealthy.
Now you can smell something nice,
just from where our footprints rise.
Now you can see clouds with sun in between, from where a colourful Bridge leaps.
Each colour has its own meaning,
just like rain, I feel your feeling.
About this poem
This poem is basically about a mature teenager pov towards their parents In this poem sky is referring to parents and cloud are their eyes and sun is the pain the hide deep inside their eyes from their children who are symbolised as flora in this poem.
Written on July 03, 2022
Submitted by veedikasisoddiya on August 25, 2022
Modified on April 25, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | ABCC DDAXX EE F EEABXXAA XF XGG |
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Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 1,147 |
Words | 231 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 5, 2, 1, 8, 2, 3 |
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