Droplets within
never thought I’d be able
I never thought you’d save
Give me Hope
It’s the melting candle
Rolling down slowly
Fading into nothingness
Flames slowly going out
Forming into pure darkness
It’s a narrow corridor
Filled with thousands
But all you hear is silence
Lost within
Blinding sun , feeling like
Forever nightfall
Raining , stormy
Grey thick clouds of sadness
You ,
Your spirit glowing
Turning clouds into gates
Opening into heaven
You,
Giving wind to wings
Of the pigeon , with a note
Where lights bright , boldly
with a glimpse.
Not hope
But WILL and strength.
Mighty enough
Pure enough
And just enough
To hold onto the pureness of
Raw Happiness within
Because that very message
Was more than
Needed .
As I was on my knees
Weakened
Begging shamelessly
To those who blinded me
Who had constant doubts.
Now I see…
Thankfully , saving me
From within .
Pure , selfless &
Beautiful wrinkly hands
Uplifting just in time
But knowing …. Painfully
The flutters of your eyes
Will close
The air within will run out.
The rose will finally fall
being the true saving
Of me .
About this poem
It’s about death and the memories that helped heal from pain and basically saved the life
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Written on August 04, 2022
Submitted by Nairahpetersen99 on August 21, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | axb acded xxxf xgcd Hixx Hxxcx bxjjjxf xxx xxccx ccfdxx c xxegic |
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Closest metre | Iambic dimeter |
Characters | 1,130 |
Words | 239 |
Stanzas | 12 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 5, 4, 4, 4, 5, 7, 3, 5, 6, 1, 6 |
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