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I'll never leave

Paula Niculescu

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You once told me
You'll never leave
And to believe you
Was so naive

Cause I'm here, on the floor
I can't take it anymore
This time it happened quick
All this blood's making me sick

As it's slipping down my sleeve
I hear "I'll never leave"
But when I needed you the most
You have turned into a ghost

But it's okay, I can't be mad
I'm just missing what we had
If I promised, then I will
Always care and love you still

Even though you said before
You don't love me anymore
I'll wait patient here for you
Cause my words are always true.
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Submitted by paulaniculescu742 on May 17, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XABA CCDD AAEE FFGG CCBB
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 537
Words 111
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
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