The girl who has his heart



To the girl that has his heart,
I hope you treat him like a king
 I hope you know how lucky you are,
 especially if he gives you a diamond ring
I hope you love and respect his family,
I hope you love him with all of your heart
I hope you have an amazing life together,
 with love that never falls apart
I wish you guys a life full of love and happiness ,
a life filled with laughter and joy
a fairy tale happy ending,
with a little girl and a little boy
I hope you support his career,
 I hope you're the girl of his wildest dreams
 I hope you help him accomplish his goals,
 even though my broken heart screams
I hope that you write him poetry,
and write him songs everyday
 I pray that you never break his heart,
and when he's sad u kiss his tears away
 I hope you see the amazing husband,
and the amazing father he'll be one day
I hope your love last forever,
and that your love never goes Astray
 I just wanted him to be happy,
even if happiness is with you
I wrote this poem with a good heart,
every word that I said is true.

About this poem

This poem I wrote during my worst heart break the guy I was In love with was dating another girl and it completely broke my heart.

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Written on April 18, 2022

Submitted by Shantilly on June 02, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCBDAEAFGBGHIJIDKAKLKEKDMAM
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,038
Words 229
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 28

Shantel Del Castillo

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