5:37 am



it’s insane how strongly
one can feel about someone
over a screen
I loved you
and you loved me
or at least I think you did
we felt so much for each other
even with a screen dividing us
even with us being oceans apart
it's beautiful in a way
the fact that we fell for each other's typed words
you saw the physical me
but you didn't need to
to know that you loved me
we were more than just faces
and bodies to each other
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Submitted by jaxonhurst on May 17, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

27 sec read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDAEFGHIJADAKF
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 420
Words 87
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16

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