I'm afraid of loosing you..
Priyanka Das 2002 (Bihar)
She used to run and come to me,
Just to see I did any harm.
But now her bones are not in her favour ,
She can't pick me into her arms .
She used to feed me delicious pancakes
Full of honey on top ,
But now her eyesight are getting weaker ,
She don't even talk
Her pale face make me think of ,
Bare tree in Spring .
She is Losing her memory,
She doesn't even remember she gifted me a ring .
As fast as I'm growing her age is growing too, I'm no more happy because., Mom! I'm afraid of losing you.
About this poem
It's about the feeling of a daughter who is watching her mom getting older and weaker
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Submitted by priyankad.53008 on April 28, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 507 |
Words | 116 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1 |
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