My Loyal Old Friend

Brian McKechnie 1954 (Glasgow)



My Loyal Old Friend

A Sad Poem


Verse 1

If I had given you another name, what would it have been?

Looking back on your life what would that name mean?

Something that says everything I treasured and still do,

A name that tells everyone how special you were too.

Verse 2

Someone who was always happy to be by my side,

Who never questioned me and would never hide,

You were always there for me right up to the end,

I am so proud to have known you My Loyal Old Friend.

Verse 3

When I felt my world was empty and I only wanted to cry,

When I was feeling low or troubled by my side you'd lie,

That tender look in your eyes encouraged me to carry on,

My old friend I miss you so much now that you are gone.

Verse 4

Memories of our time together are precious now to me,

Those pictures will never fade so clear for all to see,

For I will always find the time to remember you,

My old friend I know you will remember me too.

Verse 5

If only I could see you again I wish there was a way,

To have you by my side for just one more precious day,

My faithful partner for now my love, is all that I can send,

Until we are together again; My Loyal Old Friend.

About this poem

Reflecting on the life of a pet that someone has just passed over rainbow bridge.

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Written on March 01, 2016

Submitted by villageearthbooks on April 13, 2022

Modified on March 23, 2023

1:24 min read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme A X X X B B C C A A D D X X E E B B F F A A
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,167
Words 282
Stanzas 22
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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