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My love

Ryan M. Linn 1993 (West Virginia)

My heart pounds as my lips push against glass.
One more hit, just one more, it'll last.
My love I am torn in half. This love or our love? How could you ever ask?
I love you but this, it loves me.
I crave it, this is what I need.
If you truly loved me you'd watch it sink in its teeth.
You don't though, so should leave.
It says it loves me for me.
It says it's here to please.
I am Gollum it is my ring.
My very precious, precious thing.

 

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You figure it out. Isn't that the point? I'd say it's kinda on the nose.

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Submitted by ryanl.26247 on January 17, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABCDEFGDHII
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 451
Words 105
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
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Ryan M. Linn

29 years old. Definitely insane. Wanna be poet. I live I'm Morgantown, wv. I am alone. more…

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