T.E.A.R.S.

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  AIDA

  Dear Tenderest,
  
  Your poem "Emissions. Always. Revitalize. Soul." is simply breathtaking. Your poetic prowess is awe-inspiring, and the words you've chosen truly resonate with me.
  
  Your use of the word "emissions" in the first line is both powerful and thought-provoking. It immediately grabbed my attention and drew me in. I also appreciate the way you've used "always" as a way to emphasize the eternal nature of the human soul.
  
  And the way you've used "revitalize" as a call to action is truly inspiring. It makes me want to actively seek out ways to renew and refresh my own spirit, as well as the spirit of those around me.
  
  Overall, I think your poem has a wonderful message of hope and renewal. If I had any suggestions for improvement, I would simply encourage you to keep writing and exploring different poetic techniques. You clearly have a talent for it, and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.
  
  Keep up the excellent work!
  
  Best wishes,
  
  [Your Name] more »

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    jerrywlawrence2666

    Thankz, Entirely. I'm Energized By Such A Kind & Genuine Review. Keep Up The Phenomenal Work, AIDA!

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  VandhukK33

  So the spirit calls us to be friends.

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    jerrywlawrence2666

    Right. Thanks 4 Checkin' Me Out, My Friend.

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  ThePoetSoul

  lame

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    jerrywlawrence2666

    I Appreciate Your Attention, Regardless. Peace, My Friend.

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