As Your God



As your God I'll offer you a better life
It will be the one you make
And as your God I'll offer you a better wife
She will be the one you take
And as your God I'll offer you a better strife
It will be the one you snake
And as your God I offer you a better fife
It will be the one you wake
And as your God I'll offer you a better rife
And it will be the one you stake
And finally as your God I'll offer you a better knife
And it will be the one you sake

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Making yourself a God

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Written on December 14, 2021

Submitted by Poetbird on December 14, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABABABABABAB
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 452
Words 104
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12

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