We'll walk in heaven



12 years we've done this come such a long way,
Made it through what many couldn't but yet we still stayed,
The deck was stacked against us, obstacles put in our way,
But here we are still standing after it all side by side to this day...

We built a life together, we've also lost oh so much,
But all that seems worth it now,each time I feel your touch,
No one else has that ability,to melt me to the Bone,
Just her smile gives me a feeling, that I never before known...

I'm so much better with her,she makes me a better man,
She comforts me when I need it, just by holding my hand,
Did God know what he was doing,did he create her just for me,
God bless me giving me her each day, as he meant for it to be....

So yes I know the meaning of love,
Gave that opportunity by the man above,
She's who completes me, a Little piece of heaven God gave to me,
And one day we'll walk the streets in heaven, side by side as we were meant to be.....

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Written for a special girl

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Written on October 09, 2021

Submitted by Childerschad4 on October 11, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXAA BBCC XXDD EEDD
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 921
Words 194
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

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