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When I see you smile...

Joanna S Lara 1982 (Wenatchee wa)

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When I see you smile
With that sparkle in your eyes
I get this warm feeling inside
Like this is the beginning of my life
I love you with everything I got
With everything that I am
I love you 100%
It's you I want to grow old with
It's you who I want to be standing next to
I will stick by your side through everything
I will be your ride or die
Please believe I will have your back
Through anything thrown at us
You are my other half
Together we are one
Together we are stronger then ever
I love you
For always and forever

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Written on 2021

Submitted by angeleyes32382 on September 27, 2021

Modified on April 25, 2023

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Scheme ABCDEFGHGIJKLMNOGO
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 506
Words 108
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
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