My old friend

Nikki Lauder 1979 (Taumaranui)



A single tear drops.
And as I will it’s warmth to linger,
It turns cold.
“Should I sit, my old friend?”
I close my eyes and I can hear
Laughter of times past.
A smile emerges in the corner of my lips.
“Shall we talk, my old friend?”
Eyes glazed to the distance,
Words roll from my tongue,
Slipped from within protective walls.
“Shall we remember, my old friend?”
Memories flow, causing the heart to stir.
Remembering the energy and love
Unconditional and true.
“Shall I play, my old friend?”
Fingers, knowing and practiced,
Strum the instrument,
Playing the notes of our friendship.
“Shall we cry, my old friend?”
As we exist together, yet apart.
A friendship cut short.
But I will see you again.
“Shall we say goodbye, my old friend?”
The tear threatens again as we part.
I look back over my shoulder
That was once side by side.
“We shall not, my old friend, we shall not!”

About this poem

This poem was written for a friend of mine, Aggie Aurelian, who died tragically in 2015 far too young.

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Written on 2016

Submitted by Nikkidee on September 14, 2021

Modified on April 11, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFGDHIJDBKLDMNODPQRDPBST
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 877
Words 167
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 28

Nikki Lauder

Nikki is currently a professional tattoo artist in Auckland, New Zealand. Poetry has been a huge part of her life from a very young age, and continues through her today. more…

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