I can't believe



I can't believe that you are gone
Derya are you leaving  ?
All I could think of was our dawn
In you I confided but now grieving

The precious of all I could remember
The sweetest kisses are they gone forever ?
Lonely now awaits December
I can't believe you are gone forever

You were my strength when I was weak
Love touched us one time
You were my voice when I couldn't speak
I thought our love would last for a lifetime

I haven't forgotten
When all hope was gone you were there
Derya I know you are not begotten
No matter how far I was you were near

Heaven now receives you with its joyful hands
Trumpets and a noise full of bands

About this poem

This poem is about a soldier who fell in love with a beautiful lady who's name was Derya. The soldier by the name of Mr Buddha was a Turkish soldier who has served his country faithfully fell in love with this beautiful lady. Their love become stronger than anything, Derya was always by his side no matter what the circus was. Mr. Buddha and Derya got married after they were in relationship for 1 month following the other month they got married and it was the best married ceremony they ever did. Tragically one week after their marriage Derya died and Mr. Buddha still couldn't believe that her wife is dead. All his life he remain crying and sad but still serving his country faithfully. Each day he keeps thinking about Derya. 

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Submitted by elvis_d on September 06, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAB CCCC DEDE XXXX FF
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 628
Words 123
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 2

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