this evening rendezvous



between the flamboyan street
and the evening of a rendezvous
I exhale pictures into a yearning
allocate you above weepy frame series

in also about this early depression
By the heart, I approve weekly letters

posted from the simplicity of your speechless trace
signed your lips and
those missing

this evening, I muse
millions gift brought back by those sweet trips
proclaimed to heart
problem in general
in a silent mode

between the flamboyan street
and the evening of a rendezvous
I once again exhale yearnings into a picture
allocate those weepy frame series above you

and looks like,
this evening still need to fax time
to your excellency

About this poem

This poem represented how I put love as a secret admirer when I was young. I just didn't know how to put thing in beuatiful words or how to tell her how much I love her. I was stupid that time. Later on after many years I met her again, I was still single and so did she. I did tell her eventually but people somehow changed. I had the courage but I want her no more.

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Submitted by on August 16, 2021

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Scheme ABcx xx xxc xxxxx ABxb xxx
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 621
Words 109
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 2, 3, 5, 4, 3

Dian Tinambunan

Me and my friend spent our times driving car far away in the middle of a night, and stopped in other friend's place. We talked a lot and move from place to place, just to release our sadness. more…

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