Analysis of Another Eden

Lindsay G H Hall 1954 (Oxford)



Not in that embalmed garden long ago,
Where from an interdicted rod Eve took
And gave mankind to eat, with that fresh look
And mien no longer maidenly, that said, ‘I know:
I am a child no more, nor will you be
When you have tasted this. Come to my bed,
Come on, don’t be shy’; but left unsaid
That his ‘yes’ would seal our scathe, and our mortality.

No! Not there, not you and me, not now, nor ever! Another balmier Eden calls us in,
To take her rich-hung pomegranates, free from sin,
To give each other, and eat with Him together,
Then laugh and sing and live no more alone
And make the silken pilgrimage to rest as one.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1010110101 111100111 0111111111 0111011111 1101111111 1111011111 111111101 111111010100100 111110111110010110110 110111111 111100111010 1101011101 010101001111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 619
Words 121
Sentences 5
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 8, 5
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 236
Words per stanza (avg) 61
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Lindsay G H Hall

Ancient schoolmaster. Prone to write Latin poems. Indigestion with most modern crap, give me Virgil, Milton, Keats, Tennyson. more…

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