Analysis of On Missing Stephen



On Missing Stephen

In the morning’s quiet solitude I cry.
At night silence surrounds me as I weep.
Grief is a stealthy master of goodbyes,
and a pain inducing privateer of sleep.
A mind that’s fixed on loss is not a mind,
But a record playing o’er and o’er again.
Repeating memories that leave me blind
by the tears, I’m sure, will never, ever end.
I go about the business of my day
Aware of Stephen missing by my side.
A void, a vacancy lies in the way
Blocking joy and love of life; darkness abides.
My Love is finding his new life is sweet,
And Heaven is much sweeter with him there.
But sorrow for my loss is all I see,
And I need his loving arms to end
This unending despair.
And, in the morning’s quiet solitude I cry.


Scheme X ABXBCXCDEXEXXFXDFA
Poetic Form
Metre 11010 0010101011 1110011111 110101011 001010111 0111111101 10011010101 0101001111 10111110101 1101010111 0111010111 0101001001 10101111001 1111011111 0101110111 1101111111 011110111 101001 00010101011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 718
Words 141
Sentences 10
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 18
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 279
Words per stanza (avg) 71
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Submitted by stenamiller on April 28, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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On Missing Stephen

Married the love of my life on Feb 21st, 2004. I lost him to a massive heart attack on June 13th, 2017. He was my perfect match and there will never be another. more…

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