Analysis of I'm something

Luis Sylvestre Torres 1980 (Springfield,mass)



I'm something.
As I am struggling.
I slowly progress towards my goal in agonizing fatigue.
Trying to stay something.
Striving for another step to be complete.
Step by step alone gaining another breath.
Overcoming the prying negativity.
Refueling my soul with something.
I manage to maintain being something.


Scheme AABACDEAA
Poetic Form
Metre 110 111100 110101110100001 101110 10101011101 11101100101 1000100100 010011110 1101011010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 299
Words 48
Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 250
Words per stanza (avg) 48
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Submitted by Sylvestre on April 27, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Luis Sylvestre Torres

Born and raised Springfield, mass. Born 1980. more…

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