Analysis of Bleak Day

Mark Smith 1963 (United States)



The day is dark and beckons bleak
Its somber theme depresses me
I cannot see the hope so bright
that must be just beyond my sight
Tis sad when life holds no reward
but offers forth mere emptiness
I long to feel the sun and light
To experience earth's sweet bliss.
Its there I know within my reach
If I could only muster strength
I could obtain this perfect prize
Oh Lord to you my prayer beseech


Scheme ABCCDECFGHIG
Poetic Form
Metre 01110101 11010101 11010111 11110111 11111101 11011100 11110101 10100111 11110111 11110101 11011011 11111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 384
Words 77
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 317
Words per stanza (avg) 77
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Submitted by Harleyxx on April 27, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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