Analysis of Life Story By: Blaze McClaskey



Ay this is my life story yeah

Everyday I went to school looking blue
My life coming undone like a screw

I wondered why was everyone looking at me
I wanted to stand still there like a tree

My Mom doing drugs and my dad locked up
I just wanted to end my life but then it would corrupt

I wanted a better life
I wanted to fly like a kite

One day DCS came knocking on my door
I just wanted to not be ignored

From that day I remember we were crying
I didn't want to leave my momma we felt we were dying

I went from home to home feeling worthless
I didnt know what life was or if it had a purpose

I always thought about my momma in my head
I was always crying in bed

I didn't what her to fall
I didn't want this life at all

This life story is tough
It's rougher than rough

I didn't know where I was going to get my next meal
My life felt like a windmill

Every week I had therapy
They trynna get me happy but I don't give a fuck

Always trynna change
But it felt like a game

U touch my family imma come at u
U don't who u messing with

My momma ain't someone to mess with
She will come at u like nesquick

My brother out there searching for a life
He really did take a dive

My sisters are still seeking glory
They told me not to worry

I always thought about life
If I would ever die

This for my fam I luv them to death
For them I would take a bullet to the head

My life wasn't fair
I felt like I took to much air

The world ain't the same anymore
This ain't a game no more

That's my life my life story
Don't make me tell it again

And to all those people who doubted me fuck you
And look where I am now

I look at all the haters
They just jealous

I know when we meet up again it's going to be different
It's gonna be magnificent

Ay don't let your head down no matter what
God has a plan for u no matter what

That's my life story and I'm going to have to end it here
All I gotta say is don't get near


Scheme X AA BB XX CX DX EE FF GG HH II XX BX XX AJ JE CX BB CX XG KK DD BX AX XF LL MM XX
Poetic Form
Metre 11111101 1011111101 111001101 11011101011 1101111101 1110101111 11101111111101 1100101 11011101 111110111 111011101 11110101010 110111110111010 1111111010 1111111111010 11101110011 1111001 1101011 11011111 111011 11011 11011111011111 111101 100111100 111110111101 111 111101 1111001111 1111101 11011111 1111111 1101110101 1101101 110111010 1111110 111011 111101 111111111 11111010101 11101 11111111 0110101 110111 1111110 1111101 011110110111 011111 1111010 1110 1111110111011100 11010100 1111111101 1101111101 111100110111111 111011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,841
Words 405
Sentences 1
Stanzas 28
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 55
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 52
Words per stanza (avg) 14
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Submitted by blazemcclaskey75 on April 24, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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