Analysis of Dacă vin



Dacă vin, de ce nu bei,
dacă hai, de ce nu vrei,
eu sunt unu, tu eşti doi,
altul suntem amândoi.

Că nu-i noaptea perie,
iarba să ne sperie,
ochiul lunii, cu albeaţă,
vede înspre dimineaţă.

Ochiul vede, ochii fură,
dacă-i pui gară la gură
şi nu e mai înţelept
ochiul stâng ca ochiul drept.

Dacă da, de ce mai de,
să pălească stelele,
dacă de, de ce mai nu,
nu se-ntoarce Argeşu'.


Scheme ABCC BBAD BBCC XXDX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (25%)
Metre 111111 111111 1111111 1111 11111 1111 111100 111 1111 111111 111111 111111 111111 1111 111111 11111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 388
Words 73
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 64
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Submitted by andreic.56855 on April 13, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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