Analysis of Eternal Slumber

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Ye who sleep will be at stake
Ye who sleep will never be awake
Soul of ye who sleeps at night
You will see the dark eats the light

A curse will be given for ye
Darkness will all ye see
A ghost of night will be awaken
Then the curse will about to happen

It's always beside you when you sleep
Might as well not to count some sheep
Don't ever sleep so long in bed
Or else the curse will be submitted

Eternal slumber will be given
For those who sleep while dreaming
Ye will not be awaken from your sleep
For the curse will eat your soul while you're at it.


Scheme AABB CCDD EEXX DXEX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 1111111 111110101 1111111 11101101 01111011 101111 011111010 101101110 11011111 11111111 11011101 110111010 010101110 1111110 1111010111 10111111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 538
Words 114
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 109
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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