Analysis of it hurt



one summer day

I was just sitting there
thinking what is going on
than this boy came out of no where
he asked me to go with him !!

I asked him why?
he said that he need to
show me something
and he take me to
a cool little house

it was next to a lake so
it was like a lake house
but it was made of nothing
but glass and he

asked me to be his
one and only gal

I told him that he
was so sweet
but i need time to thank about
it

when i want to tell him that i would be his
gal he was no where to be found
his mom came out and said am sorry to
have to let you know this way

but the boy that you was talking to passed away last night in his sleep

no one knows what happened but

i run away crying and knowing that i would never see that boy anymore


Scheme A BXBX XCDCE XEDF GX FXXX GXCA X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 1101 111101 1011101 11111111 1111111 1111 111111 1110 01111 01101 1111011 111011 1111110 1101 11111 10101 11111 111 11111101 1 11111111111 11111111 1111011101 1111111 10111110110111011 1111101 1101100101111011101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 731
Words 168
Sentences 3
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 5, 4, 2, 4, 4, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 57
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Submitted by terriwolfenbarger06 on March 28, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Terri M Wolfenbarger

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