Analysis of Give me a sign

Tooyoung 2002 (Colombo)



Walking in the pavement
With you now change me into an unknown stranger
All I need is to remember how its beautiful to fall apart in your rested aurora
All I need is to remember how its beautiful to sleep beside you, while reading the bible so that you may believe in Jesus
And pray us to paint the pictures together in hills
Where the promises were to bring back the soul of mine back to your wooden bed ,so I know where I should Fly that's to the glistening sky
To be that lay man in the field of universe
To paralyse myself with happiness
To get the accentuated attention of humans and seeds
To feel the uncivilised criticism of our sexual orientations
To be a pessimist of all


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Poetic Form
Metre 100010 111110110110 111110101110011010110010 111110101110011011110010111101010 0111101001001 101000111011111110111111111101001 11111001110 1111100 110010001011001 11011001101000010 11010011
Characters 679
Words 130
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 50
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 548
Words per stanza (avg) 130
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Submitted by Tooyoung on March 20, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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