Analysis of Thoughts through your head
Mo 2004 (Lagos)
The word is so dark, so unclear
No one sees you, no one at all
It’s like you’re completely invisible to the earth
Like you don’t exist
Even when you try to live, you don’t
You want to have fun, dance, play
But you just can’t
It’s like you want to scream out loud and let everyone Know the real you.
But you just can’t
Sadness, depression, moodiness, and thoughts are what you let out instead.
They don’t even know you exist; do they care if anyone in this world actually cares about my Existence. Your Question
So confused about what you’re doing now.
Don’t know if its the right thing to do
But you have no one to talk to, so you resort to this
When loneliness creeps you resort to that
You know how wrong and heartbreaking it is
But what can you do
You need help but don’t know who to run to
All you can do is go back to that same thing that gives you rest
Oh, how sad…..
Scheme | xxxaaxBcBx xxcxxxccxx |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (40%) |
Metre | 01111101 11111111 1110100100101 11101 101111111 1111111 1111 1111111101101011 1111 100101011111101 111011011111100111001011010110 1010111101 111101111 11111111110111 1100110111 111101011 11111 1111111111 111111111111111 111 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 889 |
Words | 174 |
Sentences | 5 |
Stanzas | 2 |
Stanza Lengths | 10, 10 |
Lines Amount | 20 |
Letters per line (avg) | 34 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 336 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 87 |
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Submitted on March 19, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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