Analysis of You Can Never Be Mine



As you clasp my Heart it crumbles into

When I breathe in your beauty -

It chokes me inside;

Every time I leave you

it's like half of my Life has gone,

the flames of existence brutally diminished -

Ghosts of sorrow remain -

But I know I'll only hurt you.

Seeing what I have done to you

Breaks my Heart;

it was never my intention to see you

Hearing the very words I dreaded; ones I made youspeak

engulfs my parched Soul with seething ruin.

But eventually, I wish to be

of the horrifying Truth.

I know now that things may never be the same:

every time I see your Face

the wounds in my Heart sting

and your own Heart - splintered -

With my own Selfishness.

Self-forgiveness for how I've made you feel is

I would choose you over my own Dead body

Always - Love leads to ruin,

Friendship leads to yet more pain.

Because of Me,it now hurts us both

to look at oneanother.

Because of Me,our whole lives may be shattered

and rebuilt withmissing and ill-fitting fragments.

Because of Me,this agonizing cycle of love

Will never end -

Copyright © JRFB 2011


Scheme A B X A X X C A A X A D E B X X X D F X X B E C X X F X X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111001 1110110 11101 1001111 11111111 011010100010 111001 11111011 10111111 111 11101010111 1001011101111 111111010 1010001111 101001 11111110101 10011111 010111 011110 111100 10101111111 11111011110 111110 1011111 01111111 1111 0111111110 0011011010 011110001011 1101 101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,125
Words 208
Sentences 10
Stanzas 31
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 26
Words per stanza (avg) 6
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Submitted on May 06, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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