Analysis of without you




The day you came into my life
I never will forget…
You were so kind, so pure and bright –
That's nothing to regret…

Remember friendly, sexy voice
With tunes, that are so sweet.
I had to choose – but had one choice –
With you again will meet.

I want so much to be with you,
And be the only one!
Who is beloved by you – that's true!
So, maybe, you'll come?

Please, hear my words and answer me!
Please, be my only man!
I want together – you and me –
I love you not as friend…


Scheme XAXA BCBC DXDX EXEX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 01110111 110101 10111101 110101 01010101 111111 11111111 110111 11111111 010101 11011111 11011 11110101 111101 11010101 111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 475
Words 100
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 87
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Submitted on October 09, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Christina Peskowa

Hello, my dear readers! My name is Christina - I'm from Ukraine. I love poetry and write myself. Since 2012 I started writing in English - before that I was writing only in my native languages - Russian and Ukrainian. My poems are written in a simple English and are easy to understand. My topic is - Love....Hope you will like my works...Thanks for visiting my page, dear readers!This is the link to the song - words were written by me!http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D0kSZlbd4X0&feature=plcpThis is a link to a presentation of a poem "I Wanted to Love"http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ie-HoafZw68Link to presentation of "Can I...?"https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_r4m7lfQ26UEnjoy poetry together with me and poetry.com! more…

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