Analysis of Why do leeches cry?



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Leeches cry
when the host is dry
maybe he is broke
leaches don't care.
Cancer in your blood
like a known word
most familiar to you
a friend in disguise.

Leeches on a birch
it's medicine is drained
cursed from birth
a choice-less dare.
Medicine for your cancer
Poison for your life
wolves in sheep clothing
that's your family tree.

Leeches, please don't cry
this host is far gone
death by your hands
many years ago.
Rejected to deject
silly common sense
you thought he was dead
Who's the birch now.


Scheme A AAXAXXXX XXXAAXXA AXXXXXXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Metre 101 101 10111 10111 1011 10011 1011 101011 01001 10101 110011 111 0111 1001110 10111 10110 111001 10111 11111 1111 10101 010101 10101 11111 1011
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 521
Words 96
Sentences 6
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 8, 8, 8
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 107
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Submitted on May 08, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Roland 'KingShip' Ediare

I'm a man sold-out to The God of JesusChrist...I preach Him in & out of Season...-I I love life, laughter and being myself...I'm "BRASH"; usually not a 'respecter of persons'...I practically speak things as they are with a pragmatic intent. ...And I'm usually Very PASSIONATE about whatever I speak or do...lol ...Regarding my poetry: I usually put on a character and a subject that I'm passionate about...It brings me close to deliver my passion as the real characters would feel...As close as I can get if the 'subject' was me....someday 'Beyond the Sky' will be my reach. "Deo Volente!...Please Enjoy my poems, most of them are quite deep; so when you read try to get outside 'The Box'; because ...I write from outside the box...And Remain Blessed. Then before you rate Google the meaning of unknown word, you do not know it all...How do you fault what you do not understand...the burden of understanding is never on the giver of information, but on the recipient...Anyway thanks. more…

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