Analysis of When I write



Something happens
when I write
the air is still
my mind clear
I feel my breath
and
with another
pops up a word
Unfolds
line after line
until
it stops
Silence
inside me
nothing left


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJCKLMN
Poetic Form Tetractys  (67%)
Metre 1010 111 0111 111 1111 0 1010 1101 01 1101 01 11 10 011 101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 166
Words 35
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 10
Words per line (avg) 2
Letters per stanza (avg) 146
Words per stanza (avg) 35
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Submitted by Jet-Rood on April 20, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jet Rood

2023: In a world full of chaos, creativity is one of the helping things to keep yourself sane. ******************************** 2014: A good head and a good heart are always a formidable combination. But when you add to that a literate tongue or pen than you have something very special. - Nelson Mandela - ******************************** I am from the land of tulips and mills. Writing is a need like eating and sleeping. I think we are all wondrous creatures who deserve to love ourselves and live in freedom. I like to participate in cases which can make a difference for myself, my surroundings and the earth. My wish: humanity in a non-dualistic society. more…

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