Analysis of Van Gogh's Quiet Lines on the 716



I've been watching you since Stockton,
on through Denair, Merced, and Madera.
I've studied some of the quiet lines
that make up you. Sitting on your suitcase
waiting for the 716, reading
with your face in a scowl.
A strand of your hair falls,
and you make no effort to remove it.
Immersed in your reading you await
a revelation. "25 minutes to Fresno!"
I see the conductor remove the ticket
from your seat. As I approach you
this is what I finally say: "Pardon me,
but I would hate myself if I did not meet you."
You tell me that you have a boyfriend.
I say, "I'm not looking for a girlfriend,
but an intelligent conversation with an intelligent girl."
Epilogue: Still, fear kept me from that
possible encounter. I watched her walk off
that train to Fresno, leaving me with questions
of fate and divine appointment.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLMLNNOPQRS
Poetic Form
Metre 11101110 11110010 110110101 111110111 101010 111001 011111 0111101011 010110101 001010110 11001001010 11111011 11111001101 11111111111 11111101 111110101 1101000101101001 10111111 10001011011 11110101110 11001010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 795
Words 151
Sentences 12
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 635
Words per stanza (avg) 148
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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