Analysis of Vacant mind



Dipressed pathways
Your faint whisper
I try to blossom
No hopes only despair
Heavy fall around
Tears roll down
When it was spring
Flowers grew soon
Rough was sea
Waves after waves
Banks were empty
Nothing looked brave..
Such were days
Real different kind
Inspirations at halt
Vacant remained mind...!.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJIKALML
Poetic Form
Metre 11 1110 11110 111001 10101 111 1111 1011 111 1101 1010 1011 101 11001 01011 10011
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 286
Words 50
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 245
Words per stanza (avg) 50
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Submitted on March 17, 2015

Modified on May 02, 2023

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Shantanu Chindhade

I am an eye specialist practicing in Pune city for the last 25 yrs or so.Writing poetry in my mother tongue for the last 45 yrs .My two collections are released.English poetry is a new avenue for me and I am trying my best to come out.I write prose as well.I run a group of amateur poets and writers in Pune city for the last 27 yrs just to keep my interest alive in literature and literary world. more…

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