Analysis of Unfair

you came into the world with me wrapped around your finger
you fit into my hands like a song can to a singer
and i was a Titan warring for your causes
staring in your bubble and weeping for your losses
this isn't all there is life is like a martyr
sometimes you have to drown to really get to know the water
and i know it'll pass , the the clouds will go away and and your troubles will have travelled -to another world where it turns into a shadow and keeps the rain from falling on everything that's battered
who knew you'd be so strong that it seemed i didn't mateer at all
this isn't all there is life is like a martyr sometimes you have to drown to really get to know the water
you opened your eyes for the first time i think and i cried into my hands because you recognized the good in me
a grain of sand in an endless sea insignificant beside the miracle you are to me
you see, you were so impatient, you ;ll never know that you killed me a hundred thousand times
so this life is unfair but you never complained because god is good
a champion you've endured more than i ever could
a small heartbeat in my hands how will i ever be enough?
it'd take a thousand daddies to replace me because you are so loved
a grain of sand in an endless sea.
you are what's left of me.

Poetic Form
Metre 11010111101110 11011110111010 011010101110 1001100101110 110111111010 011111110111010 01110100111010011011101010111101010101110110110 1111111111100111 110111111010011111110111010 110111011110110111011100101 01110110101000101001111 11101010111011111010101 11110111100101111 0100101111101 01101111110101 10101010111011111 011101101 111111 1111111111001
Characters 1,333
Words 260
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 56
Words per line (avg) 14
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,063
Words per stanza (avg) 257
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:18 min read


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