Analysis of Troubled with...



The pain in people lives can be felt all the way through.
So piercing it always seem to keep us blue.
Everywhere we look and everything we see
always reminds us of you.
Who do I turn to
and  whom do I ask.
Why do we always have pain from our past?
Must we keep learning this pain over and over.
Surely this will pass over!
But it doesn't and we still think of it.
A lot of the time we look down a barrel at it.
Why pull the trigger if we will not ever be abe to stop the pain.
I sure wont, for the devils gain.
So I ask this of the lord..
Why must I endever the same pain as you?
After all, aren't we from you?


Scheme AABAACDEEFFGGHAA
Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 595
Words 131
Sentences 15
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 460
Words per stanza (avg) 132
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Submitted on February 21, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Shawn Daniels

I am a man of various skills and sick and twisted minds.....yes minds... 800 dimensions I see things in and I like to become things............ only a portion of what I write is about personal experiences. The other portion is my mind inventing things up.. I may look at something and become that object and describe to you how it feels???? If you dare come enter the twisted and intellectual mind of me ...A.K.A " SuperShawn" I guarantee you once you learn how I see things you will too....Scary thought HUH!!!!!! muahhahahahahaah I do write A lot of haiku as well there short and to the point so dont judge me unless you know what haiku is! follow me on Twitter more…

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