Analysis of Til You Return To Me



Through the window, sunlight burns into my mind
Like a warm memory
Of all the times
You held me.

As the sun goes down behind
The horizon, so do we,
Drawing blinds,
Lest the neighbors see.

Morning comes at an appointed time,
And both, we, rise separately.
Now, I wait and write in rhyme
Til you return to me.


Scheme ABXB ABXB CBCB
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 1010110111 101100 1101 111 1011101 0010111 101 10101 101110101 01111000 1110101 110111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 296
Words 59
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 79
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Submitted on January 05, 2011

Modified on April 16, 2023

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