Analysis of This morning ..Then tommorow



watching
water pushed violently into something beautiful....white crests racing...sunlight burnishing the troughs

above...in the china blue.....cloud formations that speak MY language.....my thoughts leap to capture one....
i paint my spirit into it's very fabric...SET IT FREE....SET IT FREE

another time another place....a child sees a face....LOOK MAMA THAT CLOUD IT'S SMILING


Scheme AX XX A
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Cinquain  (20%)
Lanturne  (20%)
Metre 10 10110000110111101 101010101111111101 111100111011111 0101010111011011110
Characters 375
Words 60
Sentences 11
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 58
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 96
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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