Analysis of The Wind of My Heart



I can smell him on my shoulder,
feel his kisses on my neck
I can hear his boyish laughter,
and see the dimple in his cheek
I can feel his smooth cool skin
and the way he crinkles his nose
when we kiss
I can feel the goosebumps on my arm
as he holds me, and I can feel myself
fallin deeper everytime
I remember the first time he said he loved me,
the color of the sky at the prime of the sunset,
the way the wind seemed to stop blowin
just for those few seconds,
the way the birds stopped singing and listened
I remeber the tiny scar above his eye,
and how he used to call me Negri
because I was darker than him
I love him and he will forever be
the wind of my heart


Scheme ABACDEFGHIJKDLMNJOJP
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Tetractys  (25%)
Metre 11111110 1110111 11111010 01010011 1111111 0011111 111 11101111 111101111 101010 101001111111 010101101101 01011111 111110 0101110010 1101010111 011111110 01111011 1110110101 01111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 646
Words 140
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 519
Words per stanza (avg) 140
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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