Analysis of The way I miss you



I feel omnipresent, magical, and piratical invade,
I like your eye lashes with the brown shade,
You got me bewilderment, insensible by the look in your eyes,
I seek the desert to pour the rain and sail the oceans,
I miss you and my mind is floating with memories so nice,
Your beauty and the nature is shown in all your emotions,

Resemblance of your beauty is the Mother Nature,
When I look at you my mind is frozen like an ultraviolet radiation of denature,

You are so special like a flower in the garden of my love,
I’m boiling in a liquid so simmering and sound like a mourning dove,
My heart is pondering so discreetly when everyone is around,
Your love is like attack in my mind that goes round and round.
My room is filled with the smell of your perfume,
I get electrocuted by the way I miss you and melt in fume,

By Mohamed Fazloon, © 2012, All rights reserved.


Scheme AAXBXB CC DDEEFF X
Poetic Form
Metre 110101000101 1111101011 11101000100101011 11010110101010 111011110110011 110001011011010 0101110101010 11111111101101000101010 1111010100010111 110001011000110101 1111001010110101 11110101111101 11111011101 1101001011110101 101011101
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 857
Words 165
Sentences 2
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 2, 6, 1
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 45
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 171
Words per stanza (avg) 41
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Mohamed Fazloon

My Personal profile:I belong to a gem merchant family. I began writing poetry since I was in my fifth grade. I completed my London Ordinary level and London Advanced level in 1998. I also completed my diploma in business management and I finally attained my Bachelors degree B.com in marketing - U.S.A - 2009.My Achievements:1) Won the Editors choice award from International Library of Poetry UK -1997.2) Member of the International society of poets.3) Won many awards at school for best poetry writing - 1995-1998.4) Many poems been published in local newspapers and magazines - 1995-2000. 5) Most valuable poet - poetry.com - 20126) Poet Laureate - Poetry.com - 20127) Legendary Poet - Poetry.com -2012 more…

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