Analysis of The View of Endometriosis



Beat me while I'm bleeding
Hang me while I whine
Use a noose to hold
My pathetic head up high

Thinking I'm the only one
Who suffers terrifying pain
I drowned out all the others
From temperamental sane

No I am not dying
Or gasping for my breath
I am however suffering
From all this stupid distress

It may not be grieve
Or something people conceive
But to me it is over whelming
And I consider incurable appalling

Maybe I’m just selfish
And ask for a lot
Or maybe we are all different
And I’m sensitive for this one


Scheme AXXX BCXC AXAX DDAA XXXB
Poetic Form Quatrain  (40%)
Tetractys  (35%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 111110 11111 10111 1010111 1010101 1101001 1111010 10101 111110 110111 1110100 1111001 11111 1101001 11111101 010100100010 101110 01101 110111100 01100111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 498
Words 99
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 82
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Submitted on June 14, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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