Analysis of The Shimmering Seas



the sweetest smile
i have ever seen
she's like a child
admiring the shimmering seas
i fell in love with her
wild black hair and her soulful green eyes
if i'm the poison i might have found the cure
cause she's like an angel waiting to be realized
she's got the softest porcelin skin i have ever felt
and the sweetest lips i have ever kissed
she's the reason why my frozen heart will melt
sounds like god has answered my one and only wish
i'd give anything and everything for her warm embrace
i'd live down this downward spiral if i didn't have her
i'm closer to all of my wonderful fantasies so i'm holding on to all my faith
and praying to god to let us be together forever so we can live happily ever after


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJIKLEME
Poetic Form
Metre 0101 11101 1101 01001001 110110 111001011 11010111101 111110101110 110101111101 0010111101 10101110111 111110110101 111001010101 11111010111010 1101111100100111011111 01011111101001011111001010
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 692
Words 138
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 560
Words per stanza (avg) 138
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Submitted on September 27, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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