Analysis of The Ground Reality-A Poem



How busy this world seems to be,
How active all the people are?
In search of excessive resources,
We lose our self along with the happiness!

While knowledge reigning the present world,
Technology tends to substitute the man!
Why happiness has become a rare commodity?
Tell me my dear friend, if you ever know!

Dream houses are built through our eternal efforts,
Which paves way to live in a concrete jungle!
As man tend to forget his basic needs,
He also forgets his neighbor close by!

Let us build our society with love and kindness!
Helping others will show us a role model!
The pleasure of comfort is just a state of mind!
Know the truth, contentment is the way of life!

This world will flourish with the thought of unity!
Let's substitute happiness with peace of mind!
Make a model that's easy to follow!
Know the ground reality, don't build castle in the air!

A Poem by Ayubkhan.U


Scheme AXXB XCAD XEXX BEFX AFDX C
Poetic Form
Metre 11011111 11010101 011010100 111010110100 110100101 0100111001 1100101010100 1111111101 1101111001010 11111000110 1111011101 1100111011 11110010011010 10101110110 010110110111 10101010111 111101011100 1101001111 1010110110 101101110001 01011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 865
Words 160
Sentences 17
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 117
Words per stanza (avg) 27
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Submitted by ayub_k on August 06, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ayubkhan U

Hi this is Ayubkhan.U from Chennai-India. I am a Poet and Advertising Copywriter based at Chennai. I have written more than one hundred poems and posted the same in my various blogs. I am also a Softskill trainer specialized in Communication skill. I have written many Reviews, Short Stories and Children Stories and published in my various blogs. more…

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