Analysis of The Discovery



When we saw the city,

We believed again in time.

Line of the tall spires and the bend

Of a bright sky.

We believed again in space.

Light of the large looms

and the roof of the great eye.

We believed again in perfectibility

(if not perfection), in the fresh

(if not the new).

We named it progress. The past

was not warm, so we named it dead.

We named everything we could not touch

Passed. We believed

Again in what was large.

Might of the long road and

The risk of the big wish.

When we made the step back.

Look. There. Clear measure

Of the flock on the far tip,

Of all the missed trips.

When we saw the city—


Scheme A x x b x x b a x x x x x x x x x x x x x A
Poetic Form
Metre 111010 1010101 11011001 1011 1010101 11011 0011011 1010101 11010001 1101 111101 11111111 11101111 1101 010111 110110 011011 111011 11110 1011011 11011 111010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 589
Words 122
Sentences 15
Stanzas 22
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 21
Words per stanza (avg) 6
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 31, 2023

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