Analysis of The Battle in Me



In my window of life.
There are two of me.
One holds a bible.
One holds a bee.
The one with the bible,
Also carries a flower.
She holds it close,
And smiles with power.
The one with the bee.
Her smile a lie, you see
Her bee causes pain where ever she flys
She puts blame on others,
That is her lie.
They battle back and forth.
One day one will win,
But only after Jesus returns can the battle truly end.


Scheme ABCBCDEDBBEFGHIJ
Poetic Form
Metre 011011 11111 11010 1101 011010 1010010 1111 01110 01101 010111 0110111011 111110 1101 110101 11111 1101010011010101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 388
Words 83
Sentences 10
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 306
Words per stanza (avg) 83
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Submitted on March 07, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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