Analysis of Stronghold



I met you on the ancient, wind swept
Plains where souls lay burdened and bare.
You found me under a violent moon with
Blind eyes filled with falling stars.

I was searching for solace, a reprieve from
The broken shards of every world I knew.
Weary and broken, I surrendered the
Turning stone buried deep in my chest.

Your touch haunted me since my creation,
As if searching for the home I never knew.
I turned to you after a life time of battle,
Wounded at the crossroads of the forgotten.

Your voice drove the fire from my skies,
And opened my soul to your eternal glory.
My very being was filled with wonder
For the creator who stepped into my life.

My heart knows the power of your name
As my tongue sings the song of salvation.
Now I walk with the one I cannot deny
As I discover what I am meant to be.


Scheme XXXX XAXX BAXB XCXX XBXC
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 111101011 11111001 11110010011 1111101 11101100011 01011100111 1001010100 101101011 1110111010 11101011101 111110011110 1010110010 111010111 010111101010 1101011110 10010110111 111010111 1111011010 11110111001 11010111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 819
Words 159
Sentences 11
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 127
Words per stanza (avg) 31
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Submitted on October 07, 2013

Modified on April 27, 2023

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Aaron Cornett

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