Analysis of Repetition of a Heartbeat



Let me love you, til the very end,
til Heaven is gone and time is spent
creating a book of memory with daisies and flowers,
while fates tempt us, with tempting desire.
And let me love you til our day is done,
by then, all sweet words in this world are young.
Sitting here and watching the two doves play,
moments like this lock our heart in place.
So let me love you with this love I know,
till season stop changing and days grow old,
till my last dying breath meets the end of time,
our day will forever filled with childish rhyme.
And even if loving you bring a certain pain,
I rather love you, then to never love again.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKKLM
Poetic Form
Metre 111110101 110110111 010011100110010 1111110010 01111110111 1111101111 1010100111 1011110101 1111111111 1101100111 11110110111 101101011101 010110110101 110111110101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 609
Words 122
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 484
Words per stanza (avg) 122
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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